3 point of Argumentative writting. ^-^

Firstly,maintain our old culture are the one of advantages for cultural activities are important to mankind.Based on the research from University Technology Mara around 70 % cultural activities make mankind know their  ancestor descent.In addition, besides know their ancestor descent they will also understanding about other cultural activities.

 Next,the advantages of cultural activities are important to mankind such as introduce cultural activities to new generation.Nowdays,there are a lot of people from new generation that they are don't know about cultural activities. So by explaining cultural activities will make people noticed about their own cultural activities and they will recognize their own concept in practicing their cultural activities.

Finally,the advantages of cultural activities are important to mankind like people become more ethical and disipline.Nowdays,people buzy with their own work.So,with cultural activities can make them spend their time to join the cultural activities.After than that,they will get some new attitude to followed.

passive voice ^-^

Modern paper is manufactured by people from a mixture of various fibres, including wood, grass and cotton. When the logs arrived at the factory,the bark is removed by the workers. Then the wood is fed into a mill in order to grind it to a pulp. A great deal of water and various vegetables fibers are added by the workers at this stage. The pulp is bleached and then beat it by them to break down still further. The glue and resin are mixed by them with the pulp so that they obtain a better consistency. Next, the wire screens are poured it on by them and roll it with the putpose of removing the water. It then is pressed and is watermarked by the workers. Then it subsequently is dried and is glazed so as to obtain a smooth finish. Finally, they cut it to size and are reeled it to long rollers.

active to passive ^-^

Rewrite the following sentences in PASSIVE voice. 

Adi put the box on the floor.
· The box was putted on the floor by adi

ii. My siblings are playing hopscotch in the garden.
· Hopscotch is played by my siblings in the garden.


iii. Many people have eaten the Prosperity Burger from McD.
· The prosperity burger from mcd has been eaten by many people.

iv. Are the students working on the assignments?
· Are The assignment being worked by the student?

v. Their boss will punish them if they are late again.
· If they late again,they will be punished by their boss.

vi. She reads a book every night
· Book is readed every night by her.

vii. Neither Aisyah nor Nurul were studying for the test.
· For the test was not being studied neither by aisyah nor nurul

viii. Malaysians do not drink tea in the morning.
· Tea is not drinked by malaysians in the morning.

ix. They have not seen him since Monday.
· He has not been seen by them since Monday.

x. Had the thieves stolen the money?
· The money had been stolen by the thieves?

xi. Most Malaysians speak English well.
· English is spoken well by most malaysians

xii. I love running.
· Running is loved by me

xiii. Shakespeare produced well known poems
· Poems was produced well known by shakespeare.

xiv. Has he sent the bouquet of flowers to his customers?
· The bouquet of flower has been sent to his customers by him?

xv. My uncle always complain about his nagging wife
· My uncle nagging wife was always been complained by him.

(tAsK 3) infrence and prediction ^-^

 picture 1

infrences:

• The picture show that two siblings are starving.
• They look like no energy to do anything.

prediction:

• mybe they cannot continue their life.
• mybe someone can help them.

 picture 2

infrences:

• the men fell off from the bike because of rain
• the men look like in pain.

prediction:

• mybe someone can help the men.
• he tried to stand up and see what happen with him.

picture 3

infrences:

• the women look like having a fever
• she feel lazy to pick up the fon.

prediction:

• mybe she will be cure from fever because she eat the madication
• she will go to hospital to take a medication.

picture 4

infrences:

• the fat guy got slap because he try to starte the food fight
• the boss scold the fat men because he dont listen the rules.

prediction:

• the fat men will not do the same thing again
• he always follow the rules after that..

SHORT STORY 1

              Mary was very proud of her garden. She'd planted the seeds early in the spring and tended to the plants every day since then. She pulled the weeds so they'd have lots of space. She knew that the plants needed plenty of water, so she watered them every day too.

               Last Saturday her friend Pam called early in the morning and invited Mary to spend the day at the mall. They left early and spent the day there, even taking in a movie. Pam then invited Mary to sleep over Saturday night too, and she happily accepted. When    Mary arrived home on Sunday afternoon, her beautiful plants were bent and drooping.

infrence:

• marry plant her seeds in her garden and she watered them every day too.

• because of she going out with her friend the plants were bent and drooping.

predictions:

• mybe if marry continued watered the plants,the plants will grow up beautifuly.
• mybe marry won't continued planting again.

~FrEaK AcCiDeNt~

asalamualaikum w.b.t to all my lecturer miss yang saleha and all my friend..today i got the second task to be done untill 5 pm..hee...look like good right because don't had any class yet...hee...(am i naughty)...


when i know what to do for the next task for the blog..i was relieved because from my past,i had a freak accident...haha...now...i can story mory to all of you now..hope that all of you will understand what i story about..that is because my english is broken english...haha...hehe.. =)


the story began ~~~


several years ago,i had a bad situation that happened in front of me,in front of my eyes....ahhh!!!!its so crazy to story this!!haha...why? because this situation can make me felt fault ...hmmm =(..hmm..this happened when i wanted to went back from my school..i saw the small cat....not enough powerless....walked beside the road...i just did nothing and made no action for the cat..but my heart says:


"kirin,help the cat..something will happened"


i just shocked when i felt that...hmmm...i just ignore ...and just walk back to my house...
while i walked...


suddenly


,i heard one car was stopped quickly...


damn!!!
damn!!!
damn!!!


i said loudly...honestly i don't awared what i said about...i just ran into the car and i saw the cat lying beside the car....ah....YA ALLAH....what is this...i tried to talk the driver..

this situation same like this picture.,and sorry because don't had a real picture to showed..

me:hey you...!!did you saw the cat hah!! (angry tone)
driver:ermm....so...soo...sssoo....ryyyy bro...i cant saw the cat...
me:ahh!!!!that cannot be the reason!!!
driver:that true bro...this is unexpected situation...(fault tone)
me:hmmm...ok...after this please be more carefull...the cat also...not just looking for human...understand??
driver:yes bro..
me:now,help me to plant this cat somewhere that suitable...


after a minutes...i and the driver planted the cat...hmmm..:(....

after that, i finished to clear th cat....


this is the lesson for this ~freak acident~


= i dont think that this can happened...but it is not impposible to be..
like human,we dont know when we die,we dont know the date we ill die..just get ready for the date...only ALLAH know..


=please dont be like me because i was very dissapointed with my self..i cant help to change position of the cat...sunddenly....hmmm..you know what happened..:(


i think that all for my second entry for this blog...hope that all of you can understand the story..hee...and i'm fell sorry because my broken language uses..and sory again because i story about the short story but its is really happened in my life...


that all..thank you..
syakirin ^-^

wHaT Will HaPpEn wHeN I'M 26 YeArS oLD...^-^

Assalamualaikum w.b.t.....today i want to talk about my english learning..that is my first time to me learning with online ...so happy when we do this...look like we used the technology..hehe :) thanks you miss..


6/12/2011 (tuesday)
aha..this is the first entry for my blog.....miss give me the title is " what will happen when i'm 26 years old"
that is the best thing i heard and interesting to write it..hee...:)


so,let me tell about my stories.when i 26  year old..i told that i had finished my graduate master..i had been proud because i finished the graduate nicely..hee...in addittion,i finished graduated with my lovely person..hehe...(so happy)..that is the time i'm waiting her...erm...after that i dont like to continue my study in phd..i just want to find a job that i wanted since i'm young..hee...i want to be a businessman in my own company (so good right)...


erm..i had a job before i had finished my master...i become a CEO in UEM BUILDER...wah,that good right ?hee...that become very good because my friend that have same graduated with me get the same job with me...but in others company...ermm....never mind...we always can contact each other :))) woot...wooott...hee....


erm...that is all about when i 26 years old...nothing happened..but this is the best happen in my life because i had a job same with her..:)

thank you :)
syakirin isa ^-^